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Sky Serpent

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*Zoom in for it to look better* Sorry I haven't posted in a while. I've got loads of work right now and I just got into Overwatch so needless to say, I've been pretty distracted. Regardless, I decided to draw another dragon which I've decided to be the brother of the Water Serpent, and is a recreation of one of my pencil drawings. As you can see, I really love the asian style of dragons and decided to implement it here. Hope you like it.:) (Smile) 
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Here is your critique.
Overview - We have a Chinese Dragon flying in the sky.  I chose to critique this work because it is an amazing artwork and I like dragons.  You are very talented.  
Background - I really love the sky. it is such a peaceful shade of blue. It is so well colored.  The clouds are really fluffy like clouds in real life.  Good job.
Dragon - This is such a fine dragon and it is your dragon, not my dragon.  Still, I will do what I can. I love the color scheme simulating red, white, and blue.  Is it an American Dragon :D
Eyes - The eyes are small and I would have made them bigger but that is me.  Good job
Orange Hair - the hair looks just like fire.  I love how you go from red to yellowish. It looks hot.
Dragon Overall - looks just like a Chinese Dragon, it twists and turns just like in pictures I have seen. The head looks just fine.  It is more smooth than scale like in the old dragon pictures.It has only front legs but so do some dragons.  I love how it sweeps through the clouds.  It looks like a real majestic dragon.
Conclusion - This is a great artwork and you have a lot of talent. I hope to see more of your artwork.  It was a pleasure critiquing you. Have a great day.